Get your poem on # 17
Mar. 10th, 2008 | 01:08 pm
The prompt for this week's poem on ReadWritePoem is 'Dream' and my poem is entitled
'After she's gone..' my first effort on the site..appreciate any comments.
A young man, in love for perhaps the first time...whose lover has literally just departed from his bed leaving him alone with only his dreams for comfort...
After She's Gone...
After she's gone...
The scent of her lingers.
Won't wash away...
From my hair or my fingers
After she's gone...
The warmth of her stays a while...
Sensual and comforting...
The thought of her makes me smile.
After she's gone...
Still taste her sweet flavours...
On my lips from a kiss..
That my memory savours.
After she's gone...
I picture her sleeping.
And I know that my heart...
Will be safe in her keeping.
The End.
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What next...The Fourteen Commandments...?
Mar. 10th, 2008 | 02:26 pm
I see that the Vatican has decided to nominate a further Seven deadly sins for the modern age to go with the original seven scribbled
What is it about all religions...and the Church of Rome particularly... how arrogant to assume that they have the right to presume what is and is not sinful..if you believe in God..and I do not...don't you also believe that he created it all and he decided what was sinful and then whacked it on a stone for Moses to pass on..and this is exactly my point, God did not decide a jot ...for he does not exist ...only man with his rules and his commands..and this latest malarky is merely further evidence of this as if it were needed...all religions are bunkum...invented by man for the enslavement of man...get a grip, give it up.
