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Mar. 10th, 2008 | 01:08 pm
The prompt for this week's poem on ReadWritePoem is 'Dream' and my poem is entitled
'After she's gone..' my first effort on the site..appreciate any comments.
A young man, in love for perhaps the first time...whose lover has literally just departed from his bed leaving him alone with only his dreams for comfort...
After She's Gone...
After she's gone...
The scent of her lingers.
Won't wash away...
From my hair or my fingers
After she's gone...
The warmth of her stays a while...
Sensual and comforting...
The thought of her makes me smile.
After she's gone...
Still taste her sweet flavours...
On my lips from a kiss..
That my memory savours.
After she's gone...
I picture her sleeping.
And I know that my heart...
Will be safe in her keeping.
The End.
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date: Mar. 10th, 2008 01:50 pm (UTC)
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Welcome to read write poem.
Gautami
http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com
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date: Mar. 10th, 2008 08:43 pm (UTC)
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Anyway...
These are the best dreams!
You evoke them so well!
Linda Jacobs
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date: Mar. 10th, 2008 10:10 pm (UTC)
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Crafty Green poet
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date: Mar. 11th, 2008 08:50 am (UTC)
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Crafty green Poet
http//craftygreenpoet.blogspot.com
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