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Mar. 17th, 2008 | 04:29 pm




This weeks readwritepoem prompt was to write from the perspective of a tree...well I've often been told that I'm a bit wooden so this should be a piece of cake. 

I am Tree
I am strong.. and tall.
Feet planted deeply in my mother Earth...
Suckling at her breast..
And gulping her precious essence..
Drawing it through my veins..quenching my thirst..higher.
And higher still
To fingertips... which stretch to dance in the breeze...
Or sway...softly yielding to nature's call.
Then back again...
I am strong...and tall.

 
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Jo

from: anonymous
date: Mar. 17th, 2008 06:57 pm (UTC)
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This has a lovely gentle rhyme scheme like the swaying tips.......

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paisley

from: anonymous
date: Mar. 17th, 2008 11:11 pm (UTC)
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very majestically said...

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from: anonymous
date: Mar. 18th, 2008 12:10 am (UTC)
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I see you!! This gives me a few ideas to an "I am" poem too--maybe i'll ge tto it this week and get it up to share esp as we are on our way to Yosemite for a few days

Thanks for visiting my blog and commenting too!

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read write poem tree

from: [info]artpredator.wordpress.com
date: Mar. 18th, 2008 12:11 am (UTC)
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oops that was me...still a novlce

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Crafty Green poet

from: anonymous
date: Mar. 18th, 2008 08:26 am (UTC)
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This poem sways like the branches of the tree. Nicely done

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From Gautami

from: anonymous
date: Mar. 18th, 2008 04:42 pm (UTC)
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The beginning and ending...a full circle!

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from: [info]lindaspoetry.blogspot.com
date: Mar. 18th, 2008 08:50 pm (UTC)
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It's like the tree is waking up in the morning ans stretching to get the blood circulating! Love it!

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tree poem

from: [info]mariacristina.wordpress.com
date: Mar. 18th, 2008 09:29 pm (UTC)
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I love the repetition of the first and last verse. Lot's of earthy images, the true essence of a tree.

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